Kia ora Alex, Its Jasmine from Gilberthorpe School in Christchurch. This is a very nice poem, you have used lots of awesome language in your poem. So what was your poem about? In class we are learning how to write a cinquain poem they are really easy to do. Your next step could be to say it a little slower so that we could understand what you are saying.
Kia ora Alex, Its Jasmine from Gilberthorpe School in Christchurch.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very nice poem, you have used lots of awesome language in your poem. So what was your poem about? In class we are learning how to write a cinquain poem they are really easy to do.
Your next step could be to say it a little slower so that we could understand what you are saying.
hi Jasmine
DeleteMy poem is about a tree in autumn time and next time i will say it slower thanks for your comment.
Alex
Hey Alex!
ReplyDeleteI love your poem, it was amazing! Maybe next time you could say what your poem is about.
But five stars from me!
From Lily :)
Thanks Lily! and next time i will do that
DeleteAlex:)
Great poem Alex, love this :)
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