My reflection on my writing

Have a look at my reflection.

My Reflection

My Writing

One summer morning two cercle faced tall twins called mia and dave decided to go out for a walk in the forest next to there house. They walked down to the track and started walking to the sign they had brought food, water, phone's, map, rope and a rain jacket  so they were prepared for the walk. “Ok let's go” said dave.

As they headed further into the forest they started to see lots of gorse and stuff they had not seen on this walk before but they keep walking just thinking it was overgrown. Then they come to a cliff they have been walking for about  3 hours now so they call their mum and dad to see if there is meant to be a cliff and that they have just messed it but there is no reception “why is there no reception out here there always is” and that's when they realized they were lost they must have walked of the track without releasing.

They keep on walking and then out of the blue dave falls of the cliff only holding on to a branch mia just stands there in fright thinking what she can do the she peers over the edge and grabbed a big branch and put it down to him but it was to small he could not reach it “what can i do” she thought to herself. Then she remembers a rope in her bag just incase anything happened so she immediately pulls out her rope and hooked him around it and she pulls him up she nearly dropped him put she ganes grip and pulls him up the cliff.

So they look at the map and they see somewhere 10km away from the track there is a cliff It says it is very dangerous “let's walk the way of the map”. So they look where the start of the track was and try to go in that direction. Then they find the track they can see the birds and the trees and the cleared space where the track was. Then they see the sign there back they are so happy “Yay” Mia says in a cheerful voice. So they walk back to the house to see  what there is to do at home.

So the had some ups and downs and a lot of disasters. They had to persevere through it all dave falling down a cliff and them getting lost in the woods where things could of gotten bad but they got through it and in the end it was all worth it.

The End

Netball

On Tuesday the 29th year 7 and 8 went to netball we played 6 games and we won 2 games. It was a lot of fun. We got into the semi play offs but not into the finals but we had good games

My drawing

For this we had a unfinished drawing

Then we had to make something out of it and Jess. G and I made a gumboot and the person  walking into it and farting and somebody falling over because of it. 

My holiday

pitcher story

Every Tuesday we do pitcher story this is where we watch a video and think what we notices and write about it. Here are some of mine.

Week 6

He could soar through the sky and reach the unreachable. When he flew the was in his own world nobody could stop him. He loved to fly and let his imagination run free he could do anything he could fly. But as he got older his time began to fade \

Week 7

They use to go there for camping but then something happened the unknown happened. She always walked of to sit in the boat but this time it was going to change thing would happen. She went to the deepest part of the lake a knock happened. she thought to herself i imagining it it could be anything. I happend again but louder and again she stuck her oar in felling around tug tug  and it was goon and the other goon. She could not do anything she just had to sit there thinking drawing in  her book. The next morning she was goon but her book was still sitting in the boat with the word messily written I KNOCKED FIRST. Was what she drew in her book coming true ands if she had of ansed would this of happened.

Week 8

Hiding away scared freaking out trying not to get killed something going wrong “What's happening help please help”. There's too many robot he they have to get out They can't win. Then the head chief phone rings the robots spot the and go after them there running as fast as they can but they did not make it. Who was ringing? And if only they had rung and a different time.

Week 9

When you go fishing nearly fall off no i'm not going down then omg i see a shake chasing a fish go go go chase it come on i can get it. Splash nooooooo they are getting away ohh and now i'm all wet  dang it i will get you back one day ohh watch your back shake watch your back dude i mean it @$^^&(**^%$^^ ^^$%()(((*%*)__^$#&$ and you fish ohh wait you're already dead don't worry but you shake i wouldn't sleep if i were you. Goulp noooo “ hahaha i got you” siad the shake as he ate him “ gross DON’T TALK WITH YOUR MOUTH FALL.

Week 10

In a castle far far away where your dreams come true and all your thoughts are answered lived a magic fairy called caity. She was beautiful had short hair and loved to sing and loved the color purple. Everyday she would sing and dance to the sound of the birds chirping. One day as she was singing somebody came to the door it was another fairy called bubble she claimed that she was her sister. Caity was very confused so she let her in and look up the fairy family history and there she was bubble her little and beautiful sister. “Oh my wonderful sister i have always wanted a sister and i have had one this whole time i thought i was an only child”    “ but you have a brother to named mackpack” “what” caity said in a confused voice  he is the youngest in the family and a very chirpy boy he is.    155

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