Wednesday, May 31, 2017

Poem

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  1. AnonymousAugust 3, 2017 at 9:52 AM

    Kia ora Alex, Its Jasmine from Gilberthorpe School in Christchurch.
    This is a very nice poem, you have used lots of awesome language in your poem. So what was your poem about? In class we are learning how to write a cinquain poem they are really easy to do.
    Your next step could be to say it a little slower so that we could understand what you are saying.

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2017 at 11:21 AM

      hi Jasmine
      My poem is about a tree in autumn time and next time i will say it slower thanks for your comment.

      Alex

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  2. UnknownNovember 10, 2017 at 8:50 AM

    Hey Alex!
    I love your poem, it was amazing! Maybe next time you could say what your poem is about.
    But five stars from me!
    From Lily :)

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    1. AnonymousNovember 30, 2017 at 11:53 AM

      Thanks Lily! and next time i will do that
      Alex:)

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  3. AnonymousMay 27, 2019 at 10:35 AM

    Great poem Alex, love this :)

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